Good but had some flaws
First of all, the drawings were pretty good and the story is good. The voice acting is not bad neither.
Now onto the things you should work on : first, the animation is pretty much only tweens, which is not bad but it wasnt incredibly executed(Im thinking about the walk cycles and other stuff). Also, the sound is good at parts, but most of the time theres no ambient sound so it feels empty and long. Another thing is that the ending didnt feel like one. It just felt like you just decided to end it there. And maybe you could try spending a little bit more time working the dialogues.
So overall it's a good flash, the graphics are good, but the sound and story need some work. 6/10
....But you get one bonus point for the Grim Fandango music because of the nostalgia factor. :P
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